updating animatic

...slowly. There are still some tricky areas in the timing where I'm not quite certain how things are going to happen, but I like the feel of the first few shots, where the camera has been changed so that it will cut to the important action in a better, tighter framing than previous versions of this scene.

This version is fairly close on timing at the end, though it still feels too fast in some places for me. Though I am aiming for 30 seconds (not including titles) for the final, I will not hold myself to that limit if I think the timing of some scenes could benefit from some more breather room. However, I do expect the full running time (with titles & credits) to fall under 45 seconds easily.